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pinkmika
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« on: December 03, 2009, 05:22:19 pm »


This is the story about a girl who has a imaginary friend (which is really herself) and tries her best to find a way to transform her invisible friend into a visible person.


Hello, my name is mikaila. I am 15 years of age. You can say, i am a very quiet person. I don't have much friends, but that is okay. I focus on school mostly.


This is my imaginary friend, mika. She is myself really, I have created her in my head to be the person I really want to be like. She just looks completely different. She IS different actually. She is outgoing, playful, doesn't really have an interest in school as much as I do. She's one perfect girl. I wish I was her. Everyone doesn't like me as much as they would probably like her.


My boyfriend, Ryan, is basically the only person mika likes! She talks about him all the time! She always appears when my boyfriend comes over. It makes me thankful that she is not real or else my boyfriend would possible leave me for her.

 
This is my best friend, Byeol. She is my only friend really. We like the exact same things! Music, books, subjects, you name it! She is more serious when it comes to school. "Homework is always first!" she always says. She knows about mika very well. She is the person who encouraged me to create an imaginary friend! She understands as if she can see mika herself! That is a best friend for you.


My mother, monica, is a judgmental human being. She always has something to say about everyone and everything. I just think of her as my own homemade bulley. Mikaila seems to like her. Maybe because they have similar traits?


I was smart enough to create my own person, but how can I become smart enough to make her visible? I would switch roles with mika in no time. But for now, she is my invisible friend, sister possibly. But I will not quit. I shall find away to make my invisible friend come to life.


Chapter 1 will be posted in a few hours  Wink I hope you like. please comment!  YAY


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« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2009, 10:16:32 am »

I totally LOVE the idea! Your sims are really pretty! Can't wait to read the first chapter! Grin  YAY

Just a little thing, I think you made a mistake when you talk about Mikaila's mother. Isn't suppose to say that Mika seems like her, instead of Mikaila?  Wink
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« Reply #2 on: December 04, 2009, 04:55:11 pm »

her mom has the personality of mika, which is basically mikaila.  Cheesy
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« Reply #3 on: December 06, 2009, 02:03:19 pm »

ha ok! I guess I got confused!  rolleyes

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2010, 02:13:15 pm »

Awesome! Great job! YAY
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« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2010, 08:14:38 pm »

Wow, this is good! I can't wait for more!
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